ML11263A038

E-mail from D. Doyle, NRR to L. Perkins, NRR, on Salem/Hope Creek Dseis

ML11263A038
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Site:	Salem, Hope Creek
Issue date:	10/19/2010
From:	Dan Doyle Office of Nuclear Reactor Regulation
To:	Leslie Perkins Office of Nuclear Reactor Regulation
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FOIA/PA-2011-0113
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D e a Doyle, Daniel From:

Doyle, Daniel Sent:

Tuesday, October 19, 2010 6:43 PM To:

Perkins, Leslie

Subject:

RE: Salem/Hope Creek DSEIS Categories:

Salem Hope Creek Ok, I will do this Wednesday morning.

Dan Doyle Project Manager Division of License Renewal U.S. Nuclear Regulatory Commission daniel.dovle@nrc.oov (301) 415-3748 From: Perkins, Leslie Sent: Tuesday, October 19, 2010 6:01 PM To: Doyle, Daniel

Subject:

Salem/Hope Creek DSEIS Dan-- I receive comments back from Linda Stevenson. Can you help me re-pdf the pages below. I already made the corrections in the word version. Below are the pages that need to be swapped out, the Pdf number are highlighted in yellow. For comment 1 below, I need to follow up with Linda to get clarification.

NUREG-1437, Volume 1, Supplement 1

1. On Contents page v, please include the Abbreviations and Acronyms in the list for the front matter.

2. Please provide originals for figures 2-2, 2-10, 2-11, and 4-1 because I am concerned these may print poorly. If these represent the best available, please send an email agreeing to accept the print quality and I will insert a disclaimer.

3. On page 2-82, at the foot of the page correct the spelling of Supplemnt to Supplement. (pdf page 136)

4. On pages 2-92 through 2-136, and 8-46 through 8-50, please modify the month from September to October. Pdf 146-190 & 362-366

5. On Contents page viii, at 2.2.9.2, correct the page number from 2-113 to 2-114. Pdf 10

6. On page 2-121, at the first reference, please delete one of the periods. Pdf 175

7. On Contents page ix, at 4.5.5, this title is not identical to the text. Pdf 11

8. Did you intend to omit section 4.5.6 from Contents page ix? Pdf 11

10. On Contents page ix at 4.9.2 and 4.9.3, please correct these page numbers from 5-61 to 4-61. Pdf 11

11. On Contents page x, please correct as follows: pdf.12

@ 8.1.1.2, correct the page number from 8-8 to 8-9 91

@ 8.1.1.3 correct the page number from 8-9 to 8-10

@ 8.1.1.6, correct the page number from 8-11 to 8-12

@ 8.1.17, correct the page number from 8-15 to 8-16

@ 8.1.2, correct the page number from 8-16 to 8-17

@ 8.1.2.1, correct the page number from 8-17 to 8-18 NOTE: Please correct/confirm page numbers from sections 8.1.2.4 through the end of Chapter 8.

12. On Contents page x, at 8.1.3. and 8.1.3.4, these titles are not identical to the text. Pdf 12

13. On list of Figures page xii, at 2-11, please correct the page number from 2-72 to 2-71. Pdf 14

14. On List of Tables page xiii, at 1-2, correct the page number from 1-10 to 1-9. Pdf 15

15. On List of Tables page xiii, at 2-14, there is a discrepancy in the caption in the projected years. In the text it states 2050 and on the list of tables page, it states 2030. Pdf 15

16. On List of Tables page xv, please correct as follows: pdf 17

@ 8-1, correct the page number from 8-16 to 8-17

@ 8-2, correct the page number from 8-26 to 8-27

@ 8-3, correct the page number from 8-34 to 8-35

@ 8-4, correct the page number from 8-43 to 8-44

@ 8-5, correct the page number from 8-45 to 8-46

17. Please confirm via email that none of your figures are copyrighted material. If yes, I will detail the procedures for using this material in this manuscript.

NUREG-1437, Volume 2, Supplement 45

1. Please provide better quality pages for A-42, A-43, D-9, and D-17. If these are the best available, please send an email agreeing to accept the print quality and I will insert a disclaimer.

2. Please correct the placement scheme at the foot of pages D-2 and D-3 for consistency within this appendix. Pdf 168

3. In Appendix D, after page D-45, please correct the footer problems (some are missing the designator and the other is missing the date). Pdf 212-215

4. On Contents page vii for the Appendices, at Appendix D, correct an to and. Pdf 9

5. In Appendix F, at the foot of pages F-32 and F-39, correct September to October. Pdf 256 &263

6. In Appendix G, at the foot of pages, G-29 and G-33, correct September to October pdf 309 & 313 NUREG-1437, Volumes I and 2, Supplement 45 On Forms 335, "Bibliographic Data Sheet," in number 1, please insert the volume number, then the supplement number. Pdf 377 & 329

Thanks, Leslie Perkins Project Manager Division of License Renewal Office of Nuclear Reactor Regulation 92

U.S. Nuclear Regulatory Commission 301-415-2375 93