ML11263A038
| ML11263A038 | |
| Person / Time | |
|---|---|
| Site: | Salem, Hope Creek  |
| Issue date: | 10/19/2010 |
| From: | Dan Doyle Office of Nuclear Reactor Regulation |
| To: | Leslie Perkins Office of Nuclear Reactor Regulation |
| References | |
| FOIA/PA-2011-0113 | |
| Download: ML11263A038 (3) | |
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D e a Doyle, Daniel From:
Doyle, Daniel Sent:
Tuesday, October 19, 2010 6:43 PM To:
Perkins, Leslie
Subject:
RE: Salem/Hope Creek DSEIS Categories:
Salem Hope Creek Ok, I will do this Wednesday morning.
Dan Doyle Project Manager Division of License Renewal U.S. Nuclear Regulatory Commission daniel.dovle@nrc.oov (301) 415-3748 From: Perkins, Leslie Sent: Tuesday, October 19, 2010 6:01 PM To: Doyle, Daniel
Subject:
Salem/Hope Creek DSEIS Dan-- I receive comments back from Linda Stevenson. Can you help me re-pdf the pages below. I already made the corrections in the word version. Below are the pages that need to be swapped out, the Pdf number are highlighted in yellow. For comment 1 below, I need to follow up with Linda to get clarification.
NUREG-1437, Volume 1, Supplement 1
- 1. On Contents page v, please include the Abbreviations and Acronyms in the list for the front matter.
- 2. Please provide originals for figures 2-2, 2-10, 2-11, and 4-1 because I am concerned these may print poorly. If these represent the best available, please send an email agreeing to accept the print quality and I will insert a disclaimer.
- 3. On page 2-82, at the foot of the page correct the spelling of Supplemnt to Supplement. (pdf page 136)
- 4. On pages 2-92 through 2-136, and 8-46 through 8-50, please modify the month from September to October. Pdf 146-190 & 362-366
- 5. On Contents page viii, at 2.2.9.2, correct the page number from 2-113 to 2-114. Pdf 10
- 6. On page 2-121, at the first reference, please delete one of the periods. Pdf 175
- 7. On Contents page ix, at 4.5.5, this title is not identical to the text. Pdf 11
- 8. Did you intend to omit section 4.5.6 from Contents page ix? Pdf 11
- 10. On Contents page ix at 4.9.2 and 4.9.3, please correct these page numbers from 5-61 to 4-61. Pdf 11
- 11. On Contents page x, please correct as follows: pdf.12
@ 8.1.1.2, correct the page number from 8-8 to 8-9 91
@ 8.1.1.3 correct the page number from 8-9 to 8-10
@ 8.1.1.6, correct the page number from 8-11 to 8-12
@ 8.1.17, correct the page number from 8-15 to 8-16
@ 8.1.2, correct the page number from 8-16 to 8-17
@ 8.1.2.1, correct the page number from 8-17 to 8-18 NOTE: Please correct/confirm page numbers from sections 8.1.2.4 through the end of Chapter 8.
- 12. On Contents page x, at 8.1.3. and 8.1.3.4, these titles are not identical to the text. Pdf 12
- 13. On list of Figures page xii, at 2-11, please correct the page number from 2-72 to 2-71. Pdf 14
- 14. On List of Tables page xiii, at 1-2, correct the page number from 1-10 to 1-9. Pdf 15
- 15. On List of Tables page xiii, at 2-14, there is a discrepancy in the caption in the projected years. In the text it states 2050 and on the list of tables page, it states 2030. Pdf 15
- 16. On List of Tables page xv, please correct as follows: pdf 17
@ 8-1, correct the page number from 8-16 to 8-17
@ 8-2, correct the page number from 8-26 to 8-27
@ 8-3, correct the page number from 8-34 to 8-35
@ 8-4, correct the page number from 8-43 to 8-44
@ 8-5, correct the page number from 8-45 to 8-46
- 17. Please confirm via email that none of your figures are copyrighted material. If yes, I will detail the procedures for using this material in this manuscript.
NUREG-1437, Volume 2, Supplement 45
- 1. Please provide better quality pages for A-42, A-43, D-9, and D-17. If these are the best available, please send an email agreeing to accept the print quality and I will insert a disclaimer.
- 2. Please correct the placement scheme at the foot of pages D-2 and D-3 for consistency within this appendix. Pdf 168
- 3. In Appendix D, after page D-45, please correct the footer problems (some are missing the designator and the other is missing the date). Pdf 212-215
- 4. On Contents page vii for the Appendices, at Appendix D, correct an to and. Pdf 9
- 5. In Appendix F, at the foot of pages F-32 and F-39, correct September to October. Pdf 256 &263
- 6. In Appendix G, at the foot of pages, G-29 and G-33, correct September to October pdf 309 & 313 NUREG-1437, Volumes I and 2, Supplement 45 On Forms 335, "Bibliographic Data Sheet," in number 1, please insert the volume number, then the supplement number. Pdf 377 & 329
- Thanks, Leslie Perkins Project Manager Division of License Renewal Office of Nuclear Reactor Regulation 92
U.S. Nuclear Regulatory Commission 301-415-2375 93