ML24184B923
| ML24184B923 | |
| Person / Time | |
|---|---|
| Issue date: | 07/02/2024 |
| From: | Leslie Fields Licensing Processes Branch |
| To: | Gerond George Licensing Processes Branch |
| References | |
| PWROG-18068 NP, Rev 1 | |
| Download: ML24184B923 (1) | |
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TOPICAL REPORT PWROG-18068 NP, REVISION 1 COMMENT RESOLUTION TABLE (NRC EDITORIAL SUGGESTIONS)
Comment Number Text Location Comment Type Suggested Revision Response to in DSE/ TR Comment markup/ RAI response
(Suggested Editorial Changes, Clarity, Accuracy, DSE or TR Page Line Proprietary) (NRC edits shown in red) PWROG NRC 1 (TR markup) 4-3 n/a Suggested Edit suggested for Section 4.2, DSE Section 4.2 Editorial 2nd paragraph, first sentence to Changes read:
"can be determined for forgings, plates, and welds based on common manufacturer, material class, or flux types ( i.e.,
the material purchase or welding fabrication specification and heat treatment be consistent with the RPV material of interest)...
2 (TR markup) 4-4 n/a Suggested The second term in Equation 5 DSE Section 4.2 Editorial under the square root sign, Changes {2*C([If BM, 1.1]T30RPV)D}2, should be {2*Equation 12}2.
3 (TR markup) 4-9 n/a Suggested As shown in the following, add to DSE Section 4.3.4.2 Editorial the first sentence of the first Changes paragraph of Section 4.3.4.2:
For high flux irradiations (e.g.
MTR irradiations used in an MTR campaign), a set of validation specimens 4 (TR markup) 4-22 n/a Suggested The NRC staff noted that the DSE Section 4.6 Editorial Yes and No of the flowchart Changes decision block at the bottom of page 4-22 of the TR markup are switched and thus needs correction.
5 (TR markup) 4-22 n/a Suggested The NRC staff noted that DSE Sections Editorial between the block that states 4.3.4.2 and 4.6 Changes Calculate T 0highflux for other and the decision block that states Is the Adjusted T 0highfluxVM T0 PWRVM , there needs to be one or two more blocks that state the use of weighting factors and selection of appropriate PWR irradiation data, consistent with the text in TR markup Section 4.3.4.2 (bottom region of TR markup page 4-9).